Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos. Other people say that there are benefits for the animals and for humans. Discuss both sides of this debate, and give your personal view.
Some people believe that it is not appropriate to keep
animals
in zoos
while
others believe that it is beneficial for animals
and human beings. I personally believe that while
keeping animals
in captivity
facilitates experiments
, it is inhumane because it affects the physical and mental well-being of animals
.
When animals
are kept in zoos
it facilitates scientific experiments
. Keeping animals
in captivity
allows us to observe them closely and conduct experiments
on them. These experiments
are beneficial for animals
because they help us to learn about their needs and behaviours. Most importantly, through the experiments
, we learn how to protect them. For example
, in Australia, many animals
are captivated in zoos
and scientists are conducting experiments
on them. This
allows us to learn about the reasons for their extinction. However
, I personally believe that there are other ways of experimenting on animals
.
I personally believe that experimenting on animals
is inhumane. If animals
are kept in captivity
for a long period of time, it hinders their physical and mental health
because they are forcefully removed from their natural habitats. Staying in zoos
hampers their daily lives because they cannot move and walk properly in captivity
. It also
hampers their mental health
because they stay in captivity
for a long time. For example
, in Bangladesh, many animals
are kept in captivity
for experimental purposes and it deteriorates their health
. Therefore
, I personally believe that keeping animals
in captivity
is not good for their health
.
In conclusion, animals
should not kept in captivity
because it is not good for their health
. Scientists should find alternative options to conduct experiments
on animals
instead
of confining animals
in zoos
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Task Achievement
Address a broader perspective of both sides of the debate. While your personal view is included, ensure equal representation of both arguments.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure each paragraph flows into the next smoothly, perhaps by utilizing linking phrases between paragraphs.
Task Achievement
Expand on some of your examples with more specific details or data if possible.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your essay presents a clear introduction and conclusion, outlining both viewpoints effectively and stating your personal view.
Task Achievement
Main points of both arguments are supported with specific examples, aiding clarity and task relevance.
Coherence and Cohesion
The logical flow of ideas is well-maintained, making the essay easy to follow.
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