The charts below show the percentage of food and goods bought from supermarkets in European countries in 1998 and 2008.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided bar charts compare three European countries in terms of the percentage of food and goods purchased from supermarkets between 1998 and 2008.
Overall
, it can be seen clearly that over the following 10 years, three countries all witnessed an increase in both the
criteria. Correct article usage
apply
While
country
A stayed on top, country
C
consumed the least food and goods up to 2008.
To be more specific, in 1998, the figure
for food consumption in country
B stood at the top position with
24%, Change preposition
at
then
it increased considerably to nearly 28% up to 2008. Over the same period of time, while
the figure
for country
C
grew slightly from 6% to 8%, the figure
for country
A soared from 10% to exactly 35%.
In the second chart, country
B also
held the highest figure
for goods consumption with approximately 35% in 1998, then
it rose slightly to 26% during the following 10 years. Simultaneously, country
A and country
C
witnessed the same trend. Both of these countries soared up, from 1% to 15% with country
C
and from 4% to nearly 40% with country
A.Submitted by elsenglish16992 on
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