The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The provided charts illustrate the

sales

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of five different kinds of

books

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by a bookseller from 1972 to 2012.

Overall

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, it can be seen clearly that

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the

sales

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of adult

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fictions

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fiction

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and children’s

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fictions

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fiction

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rose considerably, the figures for

travels

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travel

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, biographies, and other

books

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witnessed a significant decline. To commence with, in 1992, adult

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fictions

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fiction

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and children’s

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fictions

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fiction

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as well as

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biography

books

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, had the same amount of

sales

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which were recorded as 20%.

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while

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travels were the least purchased

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with 18%, other

books

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stayed on the top of the list with 25%. Over the following 40 years, the

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of adult fiction

books

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experienced an over twofold increase to 45%, becoming the most popular book.

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, the figure for children’s

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fictions

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fiction

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rose

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by one-fourth

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compared to the initial figure, from 20% to 25%.

By contrast

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, biographies,

travels

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, and other

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witnessed a downward trend, decreasing about 7-8% at each figure.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, books, fictions with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

153 words

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