The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The provided charts illustrate the

sales

of five different kinds of

books

by a bookseller from 1972 to 2012.

Overall

, it can be seen clearly that

while

the

sales

of adult

fictions

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fiction

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and children’s

fictions

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fiction

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rose considerably, the figures for

travels

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travel

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, biographies, and other

books

witnessed a significant decline. To commence with, in 1992, adult

fictions

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fiction

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and children’s

fictions

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fiction

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as well as

biography

books

, had the same amount of

sales

which were recorded as 20%.

Besides

while

travels were the least purchased

books

with 18%, other

books

stayed on the top of the list with 25%. Over the following 40 years, the

sales

of adult fiction

books

experienced an over twofold increase to 45%, becoming the most popular book.

Similarly

, the figure for children’s

fictions

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fiction

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rose

one-fourth

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by one-fourth

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compared to the initial figure, from 20% to 25%.

By contrast

, biographies,

travels

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travel

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, and other

books

witnessed a downward trend, decreasing about 7-8% at each figure.

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