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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

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The table compares five different
countries
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 in terms of consumer expenditure
on
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 three categories in 2002.
Overall
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, Turkey has the most
consumers
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 of two items: food/drink/tobacco and leisure/education,
while
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consumers
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 spent more on clothing/footwear in Italy.
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, the highest expenditure of all five
countries
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 was on food/drink/tobacco. In the category of food/drink/tobacco, 32.14% of
consumers
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 in Turkey purchased these items, and Ireland was the second highest country in
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 category, with 28.91% of expenses. Spain, Italy, and Sweden each spent under 19% on them.
Consumers
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 in Italy spent 9% of their purchases on clothing/footwear, making it rank
first,
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whereas
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 all other
countries
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 spent under 7% on these goods.
Consumers
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 in all five
countries
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 spent far less on leisure/education. Turkey was ranked first with 4.35% of spending, and Spain was
last
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 on the list with 1.98%. In the middle, there were Sweden, Italy, and Ireland with 3.22%, 3.20%, and 2.21%, respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, consumers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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