WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Satisfaction

is an essential part of personal wellbeing especially at work,

due to

people recently spending most of their adult life in their workplace.

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essay aims to illustrate what factors contribute

employees

to

have

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apply

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satisfaction

at work and

hoe

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how

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practical is the expectation of

job

satisfaction

for all

employees

.

Job

satisfaction

is an important element for

employees

pleased

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apply

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, the main factor contributing to

that is

work

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the work

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environment which

is provide

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provides

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sportive

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a sportive

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atmosphere, good lighting and

safe

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a safe

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workplace. Having said that these things increase

feeling

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the feeling

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of

job

satisfaction

by

reduce

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reducing

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stress and

raise

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raising

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comfort.

Additionally

, getting a good salary and benefits is fundamental

of

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to

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providing

job

satisfaction

.

For instance

, when workers feel they are efficient enough to get

a good salaries

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a good salary

good salaries

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, they will be more likely to feel valued and motivated. The expectation of

job

satisfaction

for all

employees

is idealistic, it is said that

this

is impossible for all

employees

to have these feelings because

job

satisfaction

influenced

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is influenced

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by many different personalities

which

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and

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organizations cannot afford many things for them.

For example

, some

employees

are their priority is to achieve personal goals

while

others

raising

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raise

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their income or gain experience and skills,

thus

sometimes being difficult for many companies to provide for all

employees

at the same time. In conclusion, there are some factors

providing

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that provide

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satisfaction

and

wellbeing

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well-being

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for

employees

such

as high salary, good benefits and

job

environment. Having said that it is difficult for companies to provide certain services and benefits for their

employees

which are providing

satisfaction

feeling for them.