The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart displays how frequently
people
in the USA ate fast
food
in fast
food
restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
Overall
, the percentage of Citizens in the USA eating fast
food
once a week was Higher in the most period of time,
While
people
who eat fast every day had the lowest proportion. From the data given, the majority of
people
in UAS tend to eat from Junk
food
restaurants Once a week or Once or Twice a month , with 30 % of the Citizens eating once a week and 25% in 2006 ,
while
in 2013 the percentage of
people
who eating Monthly rose
As a result
the proportion who eating weekly decreased to 27% roughly. The lowest proportion was both who eat daily or never with nearly 4% and 5% respectively in 2003.
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