The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The given maps depict the current Norbiton industrial

area

and the proposed plan for its future development. As can be seen in the first map, the industrial

area

is currently located on the eastern side of the town, south of the river. A roundabout is located at the

center

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centre

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, connecting two main roads for transportation.

Additionally

, there were eight factories

surrounded

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the road.

According to

the improvement project, there will be considerable change to the

area

. The industrial

area

will be converted into

residential

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a residential

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area

, all factories will be removed. On the left side of the

area

, shops will be constructed to enhance the amenities.

Moreover

, small roads will be built above the shops and in the center leading to housing near the river.

Next,

Smaller

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the Smaller

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roundabout will be added below the

remains

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one.

Move

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Moving

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to the right side, the noticeable feature is

that

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apply

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the establishment

the

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farmland in the northeast of the map.

Furthermore

,

playground

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and school will be created for children,

along with

a medical

center

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centre

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to provide health services.