The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart informs on the count of
participants
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for different activities at the social centre in Melbourne, Australia throughout a period of 20 years from 2000 to 2020. 
Overall
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,
while
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film club, table tennis and musical performances were making significant
extenctions
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extinctions
extinction
during the entire period, amateur dramatics presented the lowest rate of
participants
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. Martial arts members
were fluctuating
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slightly
from
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between
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2000 and 2020. The Film club was the most popular activity throughout the 20 years. It started with about 64
participants
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in 2000 and slightly increased to approximately 66 by 2020.
In contrast
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, Amateur dramatics saw a steady decline, falling from 26 in 2000
participants
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to just roughly 8 visitors. Table tennis had the most significant rise in popularity. It started with only 15
participants
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but grew steadily, reaching 53 by 2020, becoming the second most popular activity. Martial arts participation changed slightly but stayed around 30-35
participants
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throughout the period.Musical performances had no
participants
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in 2000 and 2005, but numbers grew gradually to below 20 in 2020, showing slow but prosperous growth.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • participation rates
  • trends
  • significant increases/decreases
  • stable numbers
  • fluctuations
  • overall participation
  • comparison
  • activities
  • social centre
  • Melbourne
  • participants
  • highlight
  • report
  • graph illustrates/demonstrates
  • 20-year period
  • key features
  • main features
  • statistical data
  • variations
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