The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates data about
on
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apply
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the numbers of people who
take
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part in various activities in one area in
melbourne
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Melbourne
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, Australia between 2000
also
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2020.
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, it's clear that some lines have unpredictable fluctuation.
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,
film
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the film
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club is more popular than
other
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others
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, and it is slightly increased. Martial arts have the same situation. Amateur dramatics are
steadly
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steadily
decreased and it is inferior.  Table tennis
start
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growing
abroptly
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abruptly
, but it cannot reach
film
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the film
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club
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clubs
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.
Allong
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Along
with that, Musical performances begin rising after 5 years. Looking at the information in more
details
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, we can notice that over the period,
film
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the film
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club did not change
around
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by around
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65%
in
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2000 to 2020.
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, Martial arts were less than 40%
in
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2000 to 2020.
Amateut
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Amateur
dramatics started
dramatical
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reducing about 30% to 10%
2005
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from 2005
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to 2020.
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, table tennis went up in 2010 and it reached more than 50% in 2020. Musical performances reached roughly 20% in 2020.

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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • participation rates
  • trends
  • significant increases/decreases
  • stable numbers
  • fluctuations
  • overall participation
  • comparison
  • activities
  • social centre
  • Melbourne
  • participants
  • highlight
  • report
  • graph illustrates/demonstrates
  • 20-year period
  • key features
  • main features
  • statistical data
  • variations
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