The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The figure describes the process of
glass
recycling which is a man-made operation.
On the whole, there are 5 stages to recycle the glass
until it is sent to the supermarket. After being disposed of, glass
materials can be reshaped in any kind of category. There must be some recycling bins to collect all the used glasses in order to make it easier for the treatment plants.
As soon as the glasses are reached to the processing factory, they are washed and sterilized at first. Then
they are crushed and melted in a crushing and melting machine. Due to
melting it is easy to shape them in a moulding machine with desired figures. When all these steps are done, finished glass
jars, bottles and others are delivered to the supermarket for further
usage. Since glass
is a recyclable material, it can be reprocessed and reused several times, by which green
environment would be ensured.Correct article usage
a green
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