The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011.

The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011.
The bar chart illustrates different subjects studied by male and female
students
. At first sight, we can divide the
students
into two groups: the first involves girls, which participants prefer to learn
literature
and linguistics subjects,
while
the second band shows that boys have a significant preference
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Literature
and communication and media studies.
Firstly
,
the
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comparison of the female club, there exists a peak for English language and
literature
average of about 250
students
,
while
the
last
favoured activity is History and Archeology with around 120 girls.
Secondly
, more details of the second group, on the whole period the most common activity learned by the male class is English language and
literature
with approximately 240 people, it is nearly as similar as
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the female
band.
Additionally
, philosophy is the least favourite subject that they would rather study with 50 people.
To sum up
, the graphic shows different activities that
students
prefer to learn at a UK university in 2011.
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