This bar graph shows the number of days lost due to injury per worker for five countries.There are three tome periods shown begining witn the year 1991 and ending in 2005.
The bar chart illustrates how many
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according to
injury in five different countries.The figure presents three time periods,each Linking Words
period
has five-year intervals from 1991 to 2005.
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Overall
,it can be seen that China had the most worker's Linking Words
days
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last
decade.
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number
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days
lost in China,Korea and America had upward trends within the Use synonyms
period
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However
,the rising rates are different.China began with the most Linking Words
days
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days
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.America and Korea had different starting points,which were at 3 and 3.5 Use synonyms
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ended at the same Linking Words
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Whereas
,Germany had a downward trend,which in the first Linking Words
period
was around 3 Use synonyms
days
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number
declined to under 2.5 Use synonyms
days
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Lastly
,The Linking Words
number
in Brazil fluctuated.In the first Use synonyms
period
,it accounted for around 6.5 Use synonyms
days
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then
slightly dropped to 6 Linking Words
days
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number
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