The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in hudroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart

illustrate

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illustrates

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how electricity is being produced in hydroelectric

power

station

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stations

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using

river's

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the river's

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water

energy.

Firstly

, a dam is placed

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they

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the

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way of river

water

flow

and the volume of

water

stuck behind the dam wall forms a high-level reservoir. As shown, there is an opening right under the dam, which lets

water

escape.

This

intake, only lets

water

flow

to the turbines

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day time

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the daytime

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, but at

nights

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night

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reversible turbines pump the

water

in the opposite direction.

Moreover

, in the

power

station

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station,

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we can see that turbines are connected to generators using a shaft, which in

day

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time they generate electricity.

In contrast

, the

flow

water

(from high-level to low-level reservoir in days)

spind

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spend

the turbine and it makes the generator

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apply

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move and produce electricity.

Finally

this

energy gets transported by

power

lines to the areas that need it.

To sum up

, it can be seen that

power

generation from

water

flow

is a

littel

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little

more complicated than it seems,

however

, it is still one of the best renewable sources out there.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words power, water, flow with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
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13Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

177 words

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

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Topic Vocabulary:

Reservoir
Elevation
Intake tunnel
Turbines
Generators
Electricity transmission
Power lines
Grid
Peak demand
Off-peak times

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