The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in hudroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart
illustrate
how electricity is being produced in hydroelectric Change the verb form
illustrates
power
station
using Fix the agreement mistake
stations
river's
Correct article usage
the river's
water
energy.
Firstly
, a dam is placed on
Change preposition
in
they
way of river Correct your spelling
the
water
flow
and the volume of water
stuck behind the dam wall forms a high-level reservoir. As shown, there is an opening right under the dam, which lets water
escape. This
intake, only lets water
flow
to the turbines at
Change preposition
in
day time
, but at Correct your spelling
the daytime
nights
reversible turbines pump the Fix the agreement mistake
night
water
in the opposite direction. Moreover
, in the power
station
we can see that turbines are connected to generators using a shaft, which in Add a comma
station,
day
time they generate electricity. Add an article
the day
In contrast
, the flow
of water
(from high-level to low-level reservoir in days) spind
the turbine and it makes the generator Correct your spelling
spend
to
move and produce electricity. Fix the infinitive
apply
Finally
, this
energy gets transported by power
lines to the areas that need it.
To sum up
, it can be seen that power
generation from water
flow
is a littel
more complicated than it seems, Correct your spelling
little
however
, it is still one of the best renewable sources out there.Submitted by Taha Sol. on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words power, water, flow with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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