The charts below show the proportions of consumer expenditure by sector. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the proportions of consumer expenditure by sector. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates how people from 5 (
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Ireland, Italy, Spain,
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and
Turkey
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) spend across different sectors and identifying consumer habits. The sectors are related to food, clothing, footwear , leisure and education. In terms of food, drink and tobacco category,
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around 32.14% of their expenditure which is almost double that of
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and Italy. For clothing and footwear consumers, Italy stands highest which is 9%. Spain, Ireland and
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spend almost share the same expenditure (6.51%, 6.43% and 6.63% respectively. Out of these 5 countries,
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spends a little less on
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sector which is 5.40%. Spain spends less proportion in leisure and education among these countries which is 1.98%.
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spends 4.35% on
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particular sector which is almost double that of Ireland. Italy and
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spend a similar amount of expenditure on leisure and education which is 3.20% and 3.22% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sweden, turkey with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer expenditure
  • proportion
  • sector
  • distribution of expenditures
  • trends
  • patterns
  • shifts in spending habits
  • comparisons
  • economic influences
  • cultural influences
  • policy influences
  • expenditure proportions
  • regional differences
  • similarities in consumer spending
  • historical data
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