The graph below shows the daily consumption of three spreads per person from 1981 to 2007 in a country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph gives information about the everyday consumption of the different categories of products

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an individual between 1981 and 2007 in a country. From an

overall

perspective , it can be clearly seen that the low fat and reduced spreads experience a downward trend

while

,

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butter an upward trend throughout the

period

. Margarine had some fluctuations all the

period

. Commencing with

the

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Butter

was

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reached

the

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peak at the beginning of the

period

accounted

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for 160 grams in the year 1986 .interestingly, in the year 2007 the figure

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showed a gradual decrease to about 45 g in the given order .  In 2007 , Margarine witnessed a decrease to 40 respectively. It

also

had

a fluctuations

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fluctuations

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throughout the

period

. In the year 1996 low fat and reduced spreads

hitting

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a low point with a very small number. Continued to increase steadily to the end of the

period

reaching around 48 grams .