graph below shows the Satisfaction rating of the stafThef in four colleges from 1991 to 2002. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

graph below shows the Satisfaction rating of the stafThef in four colleges from 1991 to 2002. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The data provides key information about the satisfaction rating in some colleges between the years 1991 to 2002
To begin
with,
the
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gas has increased from
approximate
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210
million
tons
to more than 300
million
tons
in 2010, and when it comes to coal, it is the opposite, it gets decreased from close to 300
million
tons
in 1990 and declined year after year to
ended
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up with less than 200
million
tons
.
Lastly
,
the
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oil, which has
similar
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situation as coal,
it
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has decreased from nearly 250
million
tons
at the beginning to less than any other fossil. Another information that
deserve
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to be mentioned, in 1990, gas was the lowest fossil
between
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them all, and started growing and growing, until it
becomes
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the highest by the end of
first
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decade. On the other, coal starts
the
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highest in 1990, but after 20 years,
it's ends
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up
to be
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the lowest.
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