graph below shows the Satisfaction rating of the stafThef in four colleges from 1991 to 2002. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The data provides key information about the satisfaction rating in some colleges between the years 1991 to 2002
To begin
with, Linking Words
the
gas has increased from Correct article usage
apply
approximate
210 Change the word
approximately
million
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tons
to more than 300 Use synonyms
million
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tons
in 2010, and when it comes to coal, it is the opposite, it gets decreased from close to 300 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
tons
in 1990 and declined year after year to Use synonyms
ended
up with less than 200 Change the form of the verb
end
million
Use synonyms
tons
. Use synonyms
Lastly
, Linking Words
the
oil, which has Correct article usage
apply
similar
situation as coal, Add an article
a similar
it
has decreased from nearly 250 Correct pronoun usage
apply
million
Use synonyms
tons
at the beginning to less than any other fossil.
Another information that Use synonyms
deserve
to be mentioned, in 1990, gas was the lowest fossil Change the verb form
deserves
between
them all, and started growing and growing, until it Change preposition
of
becomes
the highest by the end of Wrong verb form
became
first
decade. On the other, coal starts Change the article
the first
the
highest in 1990, but after 20 years, Change preposition
at the
it's ends
up Change the verb form
it ends
to be
the lowest.Change the verb form
being
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