The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main fitures and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main fitures and make comparisons where relevant
The illustration depicts the structural changes of the West Park Secondary
School
from its establishment in 1950 to 2010.
Overall
, several changes have been made in the
school
compound throughout the time period. The
houses
near the road are totally absent on the latest map
while
the farmland was changed to the
sports
field
and later it was used to enhance the area of car parking. Meanwhile, the science block was established after the removal of
houses
and the
playground
was squeezed to make spaces for the new sportsfield
while
the main
school
building remained the same. In 1950, there was a
school
building with a number of
houses
, a
playground
and farmland. In 1980, the
houses
were removed and a car
parking
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park
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and a science building were built. In the meantime,
farmland
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the farmland
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was converted
to
Change preposition
into
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the
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a
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sports
field
while
the
playground
remained the same. In the year 2010, a couple of changes took place where the car parking was enlarged, occupying the
sports
field
and the previous parking area. The
playground
was shrunk in order to establish a new
sports
field
,
although
smaller than the previous one.
On the other hand
,
science
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the science
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block and the main
school
building remained
same
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the same
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after their founding structure.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words school, houses, sports, field, playground with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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