The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main fitures and make comparisons where relevant
The illustration depicts the structural changes of the West Park Secondary
School
from its establishment in 1950 to 2010.
Overall
, several changes have been made in the school
compound throughout the time period. The houses
near the road are totally absent on the latest map while
the farmland was changed to the sports
field
and later it was used to enhance the area of car parking. Meanwhile, the science block was established after the removal of houses
and the playground
was squeezed to make spaces for the new sportsfield while
the main school
building remained the same.
In 1950, there was a school
building with a number of houses
, a playground
and farmland. In 1980, the houses
were removed and a car parking
and a science building were built. In the meantime, Replace the word
park
farmland
was converted Correct article usage
the farmland
to
Change preposition
into
the
Correct article usage
a
sports
field
while
the playground
remained the same.
In the year 2010, a couple of changes took place where the car parking was enlarged, occupying the sports
field
and the previous parking area. The playground
was shrunk in order to establish a new sports
field
, although
smaller than the previous one. On the other hand
, science
block and the main Correct article usage
the science
school
building remained same
after their founding structure.Correct article usage
the same
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, houses, sports, field, playground with synonyms.
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