The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts depict the devices that individuals of different ages use to view
TV
entertainment in Canada during two time periods.
Overall
, the majority of young adults utilize traditional
TV
and Laptop computers in the first year, with 35% in the first one and the latter with 20%.
Otherwise
, in 2019 youngsters choose to use flat-screen televisions and mobile phones with a proportion of 27% and 26%, respectively.
Additionally
, other specific details regarding
devices
Change the noun form
device
show examples
management are the conventional
TV
, which has sharply decreased starting from 34% in 2009 and
finally
falling to 4% in 2019.
While
flat-screen is the entertainment device which has the most substantial rise, around 19%.
Moreover
, the use of Desktop computers and Laptops in both periods of years has slightly declined around 6% and 8% respectively.
To sum up
, the graphics show changes
of
Change preposition
in
show examples
TV
devices used by young adults in the years 2009 and 2019.
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