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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The set of maps illustrates information about an
island
 next and before some
changes
 have been made.
Overall
,
this
 area experienced
a lots
Correct the article-noun agreement
a lot
lots
show examples
 of
changes
 that are building a restaurant and a reception
also
Rephrase
as well as
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 many
accommodation
Change to a plural noun
accommodations
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 and a pier.
However
,
this
island
 was an empty land before doing
changes
. Before making
changes
 the
island
 was completely out of any building there were just a few trees and only a piece of land surrounded by the sea
also
Rephrase
as well as
show examples
an
Change the article
a
show examples
 small beach
in
Change preposition
on
show examples
 the left
side
 of the
island
. After
doing
Verb problem
making
show examples
 some
changes
 a swimming area has been made on the beach, and
also
 a pier and ships in the south of the
island
. A restaurant and a reception building
has
Wrong verb form
have been
show examples
 built in front of each other
in
Change preposition
on
show examples
 the east
side
 of the
island
 and are connected by
vehicle
Correct article usage
a vehicle
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 track which is new. There are some accommodation places
in
Change preposition
on
show examples
 both
side
Change to a plural noun
sides
show examples
eat
Correct your spelling
east
show examples
 and west of the
island
 that are separated from each other
however
, each
side
connected
Add a missing verb
is connected
show examples
 by some footpath.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, changes, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 5 times.
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