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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The set of maps illustrates information about an
island
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 next and before some
changes
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 have been made.
Overall
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,
this
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 area experienced
a lots
Correct the article-noun agreement
a lot
lots
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 of
changes
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 that are building a restaurant and a reception
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also
Rephrase
as well as
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 many
accommodation
Change to a plural noun
accommodations
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 and a pier.
However
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,
this
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island
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 was an empty land before doing
changes
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. Before making
changes
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 the
island
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 was completely out of any building there were just a few trees and only a piece of land surrounded by the sea
Linking Words
also
Rephrase
as well as
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an
Change the article
a
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 small beach
in
Change preposition
on
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 the left
side
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 of the
island
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. After
doing
Verb problem
making
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 some
changes
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 a swimming area has been made on the beach, and
also
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 a pier and ships in the south of the
island
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. A restaurant and a reception building
has
Wrong verb form
have been
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 built in front of each other
in
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on
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 the east
side
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 of the
island
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 and are connected by
vehicle
Correct article usage
a vehicle
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 track which is new. There are some accommodation places
in
Change preposition
on
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 both
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side
Change to a plural noun
sides
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eat
Correct your spelling
east
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 and west of the
island
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 that are separated from each other
however
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, each
side
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connected
Add a missing verb
is connected
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 by some footpath.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, changes, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 5 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Development
  • Infrastructure
  • Accommodation
  • Recreational areas
  • Chalets
  • Reception area
  • Restaurant
  • Footpaths
  • Vehicular tracks
  • Pier
  • Natural landscape
  • Constructed facilities
  • Tourist attractions
  • Preservation
  • Transport access
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