The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.
The provided bar chart depicts the proportion of the population in the UK providing money to charity divided by
age
between 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, it is remarkable that in 1990 the highest percentage of spending money to
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the
charity was the people aged 36 to 50. Correct article usage
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While
the age
of 51 to 65 gained the most amount in 2010.
To begin
with the youngest age
, the percentage stood at around 15 percent
in 1990, Change the spelling
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however
in the recent year was only 6 percent
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Then
, in the age
of 26 to 35 in 1990 experienced around 30 percent
which was more than the latter year around 10 percent
. Moving to the highest amount of citizens spent was approximately 43 percent
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per cent
while
in 2010 the proportion witnessed 35 percent
.
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In contrast
, in
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age
between 51 to 65 in 2010 had
almost 40 Verb problem
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which was more than the Change the spelling
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former
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previous
percent
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Lastly
, the percentage stood at 35 percent
and 32 Change the spelling
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percent
in 2010 and 1990, respectively.Change the spelling
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