The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictures
shows
Change the verb form
show
a
museum maps from 1998 and 2008.
Correct article usage
apply
Firstly
, one of the major points of the premise was the permanent exhibition rooms. Previously it is located at
both wings of the building, but Change preposition
on
then
it is renovated to be placed in
the east side. Change preposition
on
Secondly
, temporary exhibition room
were moved from the southwest to the west end of the building.
Fix the agreement mistake
rooms
Furthermore
, the garden experienced an improvement due to
the fountains
installations. Meanwhile, the cafe on its north Change noun form
fountain's
fountains'
were
Change the verb form
was
also
expanded as the cafe sitting area were
located in the garden's northwest yard. It is Change the verb form
was
also
worth to note
that beside the cafe sits a new restaurant.
Change the verb form
noting
Moreover
, while
initially
the shop and the bags and coats section were located in the southeast part, in 2008 it was relocated to the premise's southwest part. Lastly
, the tickets and entrance/exit remained to be located in
the south end of the building.Change preposition
at
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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