In many coutries, people do not recycle waste materials, such as bottles and newspaper. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to this problem?
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recycling
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a worng
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have shown
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beneficial
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On
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beneficial
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the benefits
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of
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recycling
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them
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feature
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features
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reason
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To sum up
, In my opinion
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of
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apply
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of because
easily
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The essay attempts to address both parts of the task by discussing reasons for the lack of recycling and suggesting solutions.
coherence cohesion
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