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In many coutries, people do not recycle waste materials, such as bottles and newspaper. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to this problem?

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coherence cohesion
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task achievement
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear topic sentence that outlines the main idea of the paragraph.
task achievement
The essay attempts to address both parts of the task by discussing reasons for the lack of recycling and suggesting solutions.
coherence cohesion
There is an effort to draw conclusions and summarize the points discussed.

Your opinion

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If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycle
  • waste materials
  • bottles
  • newspaper
  • awareness
  • education
  • environmental impact
  • benefits
  • infrastructure
  • collection services
  • incentives
  • reward programs
  • participation
  • cultural factors
  • common practice
  • influencers
  • community leaders
  • social media campaigns
  • economic barriers
  • subsidies
  • financial incentives
  • government policies
  • regulations
  • practices
  • user-friendly
  • accessible
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