The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in China in four periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart depicts the number of males and females in
further
education
, which were full-time and part-time studies in 4 periods in China.
Overall
, it is obviously seen that part-time education
was significantly higher all over the period in both genders, furthermore
, the number of full-time students experienced a gradual increase in men and women, stabilising at the same level at the final stage.
To begin
with, mankind accounted for 1,000,000 on
half-time Change preposition
in
education
in the 70s, which was the highest among the whole time in males and those who studied full-time, beginning with its lowest quantity at the same time. Unlikely, full-time educated men increased remarkably over the 2 decades and the other had a downward trend levelling off at around 250 and 900 thousand respectively.
Secondly
, the quantity of ladies that studied fully, was at almost 70,000 in the beginning, while
the other one was 10 times more than that in 1970/71. Throughout the whole period, they both had an upward trend, in the 90s part-time education
peaked at over 1000 thousand, which was the most in the graph, whereas
another reached a peak, standing at just above 200,000.Submitted by novruzluahmed2007 on
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