The diagram below shows the development of a particular area between 1965 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the development of a particular area between 1965 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps given show how a particular region transformed from 1965 until now. From an
overall
perspective, it is evident that the area witnessed significant changes, cutting down all trees
while
extending more housing areas and providing facilities for local dwellers. From 1965 to the present, more houses and apartments have been constructed
in
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the site in the northeastern, expanding the original housing area. To the South of the riverside, there have been some houses added over the time frame surveyed. During the period, the ferry has been turned into a new road bridge which links the region to the city. In the West of the city, all trees were cut down to make way for a large car park. There was
also
a smaller car park which was located in the middle of the residential area.
Moreover
, a footbridge is planned to be built by 2010,
while
they
also
plan to erect a yacht marina and a car park nearby.
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