It is argued that
music
is the best manner to attract individuals from different countries and ages. I totally agree with
this
statement.
As well as
,
people
listen to
music
for many reasons especially
they want to be
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moodCorrect article usage
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and relax.
On the one hand,
music
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a significant role
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people
to relieve stress.
For example
, some young
people
pay attention to
music
after a busy day with more stress and
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.
However
, when
people
listen to
music
they don't care about
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nationality
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just they hear
becauseCorrect pronoun usage
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they feel
restWrong verb form
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.So, we can see
people
from different nations but they prefer the same
music
.
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the
secondCorrect word choice
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hand,
people
listen to
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music
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various occasions
such
as,
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the birthday event and the wedding.
Furthermore
, they listen to different kinds of
music
from all around the world. One clear example is the
music
of birthday (
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to you) we notice that when we watch birthday parties on social media. Those
people
listen to
this
music
thinking of the culture or nationality of any
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.
In conclusion, individuals from
nations and different ages prefer the same kind of
music
.
In addition
, they hear without
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either criterion or edges.In my opinion that
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impact force of
music
and the similarity of the hearken
.