The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart illustrates
the
information about the number of films captured in five countries in three different years.
Correct article usage
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Overall
, countries A and B have high numbers in produced films Linking Words
while
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C
, D and E are weak producers.
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Although
both A and B have high production, A is in first place in all three years. Linking Words
Moreover
, the amount of films is the same which was almost 87 in 2007 and 2008 and it decreased to 80 in later years.
Country B comes in second place and is different from A, its production of movies increases year by year, with 50 in 2007, 2 more in 2008 and ending up with filming 70 movies in the following year.
Among countries Linking Words
C
, D and E with low production, Use synonyms
C
and E show Use synonyms
a consistent increases
but in country Correct the article-noun agreement
a consistent increase
consistent increases
C
the number increases at a higher rate. Use synonyms
However
, for D, there is not a trend going on.Linking Words
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