You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

 

You should write at least 150 words
The given chart illustrates
the
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information about the number of films captured in five countries in three different years.
Overall
, countries A and B have high numbers in produced films
while
C
, D and E are weak producers.
Although
both A and B have high production, A is in first place in all three years.
Moreover
, the amount of films is the same which was almost 87 in 2007 and 2008 and it decreased to 80 in later years. Country B comes in second place and is different from A, its production of movies increases year by year, with 50 in 2007, 2 more in 2008 and ending up with filming 70 movies in the following year. Among countries
C
, D and E with low production,
C
and E show
a consistent increases
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a consistent increase
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but in country
C
the number increases at a higher rate.
However
, for D, there is not a trend going on.
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