More and more people in the city live in homes with small spaces or no outdoor areas. Do you think it is a negative or positive development？

It is notable that there is a trend of growing populations living in

accomodations

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accommodations

accommodation

with less spacious spaces or even without outdoor areas.

However

,

while

some

people

could get benefits from it, I believe that it is a negative development in regard

of

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residing in smaller places. There are several reasons why it is not a positive effect.

Firstly

, living in rather crowded areas could cause varied forms of

health

issues.

For example

,

people

cannot

obtained

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obtain

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enough sunlight and fresh air even though windows are opened. It is crucial for humans to get an amount of vitamin D by absorbing the

sunligh

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sunlight

. Without enough

nutruients

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nutrients

,

people

might be getting some mental

health

problems, or even worse, physical

health

issues.

Secondly

, privacy is something relatively essential for every

individuals

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, without enough private quality time alone,

people

cannot have a high quality of life. From my personal experience, when I was living with my flatmates sharing common spaces in the same flat, I could always hear my flatmates' movements or their phone conversations only by

listening

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their voices through a single thin wall.

This

made me

fell

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feel

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extremely uncomfortable because if I could hear them, they must

can

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hear

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me.

Thirdly

, sharing common spaces,

such

as toilet, kitchen, and shower room with flatmates could be unsanitized. If we are unfortunate enough

living

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to live

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with undesirable

roomates

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roommates

who don't even bother to clean up the mess they make, it

colud

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could

be a major problem.

Also

, we may need to spend extra time discussing the house

chroes

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chores

distribution and arrangements.

This

could result in destroying the relationship between each other. In conclusion, living in smaller places causes us not only

health

issues

due to

not obtaining enough nutrients in daily life, but

also

lead

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to related problems in terms of traumatizing the social relationship with

people

we co-living with.