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The given pie chart represents the benefit of water been used in six continent for different reason in percent.

The given pie chart represents the benefit of water been used in six continent for different reason in percent.
#benefit #water #six #continent #reason #percent
Overall
, Agriculture is the most used in four areas is agriculture
while
 North America and Europe
use
industrial
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industry
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 the highest. For North America
the
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almost half
amount
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the amount
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 of water has been used by industrial
follow
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followed
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 by gardening at 39
percent
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per cent
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 which is 26
percent
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per cent
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 more than domestic.
Moreover
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 Europe
use
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uses
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 water for
industrial
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more than half,
use
,agriculture at 32
percent
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per cent
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also
 domestic has
been
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used only 10
percent
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per cent
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lower
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less
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 than a quarter.
In contrast
,South America
use
agricultural
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agriculture
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at
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the
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first at 70
percent
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per cent
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, domestic is in
the
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second
for
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at
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 nearly 20
percent
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per cent
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along with
 industrial at the least.
Future
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more
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Africa
use
 water 9
percent
 more than three
quarter
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quarters
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,domestic
also
agricultural
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agriculture
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 have the many at 9 and 7
percent
 respectively. For
Asia
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the Asia
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 zone, two areas have the
closes
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closest
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 number. Start with Central Asia at 88
percent
 in gardening, 7
percent
 at domestic which is 2
percent
 larger than industrial.
Lastly
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 South East Asia
use
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uses
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 agricultural at more than
three- fourth
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three-fourth
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,
then
 Industrial at 12
percent
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per cent
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 which is 5
percent
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per cent
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 more than domestic.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words use, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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