The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The given map demonstrates the buildings in Norbiton town at present time
along with
their
improvements
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plan
in
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the future.
The
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considerable part of changing is all the
factory
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factories
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will turn to
housing
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and have more than today.
Moreover
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they will fabricate facilities for
the
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convenience.
To begin
with the East
side
of the map, in the
plan
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the five
factory
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factories
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will
replaced
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by three housing
also
has
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have
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playground
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a playground
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at
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above between two
accommodation
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,
as well as
school
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a school
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at the right
side
at the end
of the road. The river will divide
at
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the middle for accommodation
with
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create more
road
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,Farmland still exists . In the
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center
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the big circle still remain plus the small circle under it. The hospital
have
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been added from
empty
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the empty
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space
at
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the right
side
. Opposite the medical at the west
side
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they will change the factory to malls.
In
addition
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they will build more
house
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houses
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including
invent
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the road to the town.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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