The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The chart elaborates on the data of the variation that took place in three different areas of misconduct in Panama City between 2010 to 2019.
Overall
, the rate of burglary was at its peak in 2011 with the number of cases
around 3700. While
,
car theft and robbery Remove the comma
apply
cases
were in a range nearly at 2500 and 700 respectively.
However
, burglary incidents after 2011 showed a sudden dramatic fall from 2012 to 2015 afterwards it continues with Correct article usage
a numbered
numbered
of Change the form of the verb
number
cases
of approximately 1000 till 2019. While
, car theft cases
began from
2700Change preposition
at
Correct word choice
apply
although
, from the middle of 2012 to 2016 , the number of cases
dropped to around 2000 , but
Remove the conjunction
apply
at the end
of this
2019 cases
came back at
Change preposition
apply
the
beginning Correct article usage
apply
from
where Change preposition
apply
it
started to happen. Correct pronoun usage
they
On the other hand
, robbery cases
remain at the lowest among all, from the inaugurated nearby 700. Afterwards, the pattern was like a zigzag till the end. In addition
, the maximum and minimum cases
over the period of time were around 900 in 2012 and 500 in 2015. In the end, this
also
ended up with the number of occurrences as the same as the start.Submitted by raokaifxc on
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