The chart below shows the percentage of people born in and outside of Australia living in cities, and towns, and Rural areas in 1950 and 2010. Summurise the information by selecting and reporting the main features of the graph and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of people born in and outside of Australia living in cities, and towns, and Rural areas in 1950 and 2010. Summurise the information by selecting and reporting the main features of the graph and make comparison where relevant.
The bar charts depict the fraction of
population
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the population
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born in and out of Australia living in cities,
towns
and rural
areas
in 2 specific years 1950 and 2010.
Overall
, in 2010, people born in and outside Australia had an upward trend,
while
rural
areas
and
towns
experienced a considerable decline over the given period.
To begin
with, in the beginning, humans born outside stood at 60 per cent,
likewise
, inside followed it with a 15% difference, standing at nearly 45%. In rural
areas
, had reached a peak of 40%, unlike
to
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locals, which was 10% varied (30%). Human beings in
towns
, who were born out of
this
land, had
the
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half proportion of
other
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the other
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one, accounting for 10 and 20 per cent, respectively. In 2010, over the 6 decades in cities both kinds rose by the same amount 20%, reaching a peak of just above 60 and 80, correspondingly.
However
, rural
areas
dipped remarkably,
that
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and
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they levelled off at under 15%. People born outside and inside in
towns
plummed to the lowest percentage, being at 10 and 15 per cent, in order.
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