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The given line graph illustrates the figure for carbon dioxide emitted by each person in four countries in Europe over a span of 40 years, from 1967 to 2007.

The given line graph illustrates the figure for carbon dioxide emitted by each person in four countries in Europe over a span of 40 years, from 1967 to 2007.
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The line graph illustrates the amount of carbon dioxide
emissions
 (in metric
tonnes
) per individual
that
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living in
UK
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the UK
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 and three European countries (Sweden, Italy, and Portugal) for five decades (1967 - 2007).
Overall
,
people
 in
United
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the United
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 Kingdom
was
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were
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 the highest contributor
of
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to
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 gas
emissions
 for 50 years
while
Portuguese
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the Portuguese
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 contributed the lowest
emissions
 except for the
last
 year.
Proportion
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The proportion
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 of
emissions
that
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contributed by
United
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the United
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 Kingdom experienced
downward
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a downward
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 trend,
while
 the proportion of
emissions
 sourced by
people
 in Portugal and Italy
had
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steadily increased.
Linegraph
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Line graph
 for
emissions
 from
people
 in Sweden was
fluctuative
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fluctuating
.
United
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The United
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 Kingdom presented
the
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Carbon Dioxide
initially
 by 11 metric
tonnes
 per
indiviual
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individual
 and
then
 dropped to 9 metric
tonnes
 per person.
Converesly
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Conversely
,
emissions
 contributed
from
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by
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 Italian accounted
by
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for
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 4.1 metric
tonnes
 per person in 1967 and rose to 7 metric
tonnes
 per individual in 2007. Looking at the source of
emissions
 from Portugal,
initially
 accounted
by
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for
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 1 metric
tonnes
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tonne
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 per individual in 1967 and increased significantly to 5 metric
tonnes
in
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five decades later. The
people
 in
Swedden
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Sweden
 contributed 8.2 metric
tonnes
 per
peson
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person
 in 1967 and rose to over 10 metric
tonnes
 in 1977
then
 reached only 5 metric
tonnes
 in 2007.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "initially, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words emissions, tonnes, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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