The given line graph illustrates the figure for carbon dioxide emitted by each person in four countries in Europe over a span of 40 years, from 1967 to 2007.
The line graph illustrates the amount of carbon dioxide
emissions
(in metric Use synonyms
tonnes
) per individual Use synonyms
that
living in Correct pronoun usage
apply
UK
and three European countries (Sweden, Italy, and Portugal) for five decades (1967 - 2007).
Correct article usage
the UK
Overall
, Linking Words
people
in Use synonyms
United
Kingdom Correct article usage
the United
was
the highest contributor Correct subject-verb agreement
were
of
gas Change preposition
to
emissions
for 50 years Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
Portuguese
contributed the lowest Correct article usage
the Portuguese
emissions
except for the Use synonyms
last
year. Linking Words
Proportion
of Add an article
The proportion
emissions
Use synonyms
that
contributed by Correct pronoun usage
apply
United
Kingdom experienced Correct article usage
the United
downward
trend, Add an article
a downward
while
the proportion of Linking Words
emissions
sourced by Use synonyms
people
in Portugal and Italy Use synonyms
had
steadily increased. Unnecessary verb
apply
Linegraph
for Correct your spelling
Line graph
emissions
from Use synonyms
people
in Sweden was Use synonyms
fluctuative
.
Correct your spelling
fluctuating
United
Kingdom presented Correct article usage
The United
the
Carbon Dioxide Correct article usage
apply
initially
by 11 metric Linking Words
tonnes
per Use synonyms
indiviual
and Correct your spelling
individual
then
dropped to 9 metric Linking Words
tonnes
per person. Use synonyms
Converesly
, Correct your spelling
Conversely
emissions
contributed Use synonyms
from
Italian accounted Change preposition
by
by
4.1 metric Change preposition
for
tonnes
per person in 1967 and rose to 7 metric Use synonyms
tonnes
per individual in 2007.
Looking at the source of Use synonyms
emissions
from Portugal, Use synonyms
initially
accounted Linking Words
by
1 metric Change preposition
for
Use synonyms
tonnes
per individual in 1967 and increased significantly to 5 metric Change to a singular noun
tonne
tonnes
Use synonyms
in
five decades later.
The Change preposition
apply
people
in Use synonyms
Swedden
contributed 8.2 metric Correct your spelling
Sweden
tonnes
per Use synonyms
peson
in 1967 and rose to over 10 metric Correct your spelling
person
tonnes
in 1977 Use synonyms
then
reached only 5 metric Linking Words
tonnes
in 2007.Use synonyms
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