The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. make compars ins whatre by sanecting and reporting the main features

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

make compars ins whatre by sanecting and reporting the main features
The bar chart illustrates the result of the analysis of
people
’s drinking routine and purchasing habits of
coffee
and tea in different Australian cities
Sydney
,
Melbourne
,
Brisbane
,
Adelaide
and Hobart.
Overall
, in all five countries, the highest proportion of
people
went to cafes to drink
coffee
and tea in the
last
month
. The
percentage
of
people
who bought instant
coffee
came to the second highest
percentage
,
while
the lowest
percentage
of
people
who only bought fresh
coffee
in the
last
four weeks . The
percentage
of
people
who went to a
coffee
shop for
coffee
or tea in the
last
four weeks in
Sydney
,
Melbourne
and Hobart was the highest
percentage
compared with all others nearly 61%,64% and 63% respectively in the
last
month
, whilst
people
in
Brisbane
and
Adelaide
had the lowest
percentage
with 55% and 49%. The
percentage
of
people
consuming instant
coffee
was the largest in Hobart,
Adelaide
and
Brisbane
nearly 54%,50% and 53% respectively in the
last
month
. Meanwhile, the consumption of instant
coffee
in
Melbourne
and
Sydney
had the smallest
percentage
with only 47% and 45% in the
last
four weeks.
However
,
people
who consumed fresh
coffee
in the
last
month
were the highest number in
Sydney
and
Melbourne
nearly 44 per
cent
and 43 per
cent
respectively,
while
Harbor City took the second highest number of bought fresh
coffee
nearly 37 per
cent
.
People
from
Brisbane
and
Adelaide
had relatively the same
percentage
of buying fresh
coffee
in the
last
month
at 34 per
cent
.
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