The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph indicates different percentages of individual's drinking habits and purchasing
coffee
and tea compared by
five Australian cities.
Change preposition
to
Overall
, it is clear to see that, most people in Melbourne, Sydney and Hobart prefer fresh coffee
, while
, for
instance
Add a comma
instance,
coffee
is popular in Brisbane and Adelaide; however
, the least number is going to a cafe in every given part of Australia.
To begin
with, the evidence habits of national in Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart are favour to buy the fresh coffee
in last
4 weeks which close to 65% of all. Meanwhile, the amount people in Brisbane and Adelaide who prefer to buy fresh and instant coffee
is a similar number with briefly to 50 and 55%.
On the other hand
, the quantity
of nationals who love to go to cafes Change the quantifier
number
are
lower than others, Change the verb form
is
likewise
, Brisbane and Adelaide had only 34% and Hobart have
circa 40%. Wrong verb form
had
In contrast
, several people in Sydney and Melbourne choose to buy at a cafe with
approximately 45%, which is a higher total.Change preposition
at
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