The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph indicates different percentages of individual's drinking habits and purchasing
coffee
and tea compared
by
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five Australian cities.
Overall
, it is clear to see that, most people in Melbourne, Sydney and Hobart prefer fresh
coffee
,
while
,
for
instance
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coffee
is popular in Brisbane and Adelaide;
however
, the least number is going to a cafe in every given part of Australia.
To begin
with, the evidence habits of national in Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart are favour to buy the fresh
coffee
in
last
4 weeks which close to 65% of all. Meanwhile, the amount people in Brisbane and Adelaide who prefer to buy fresh and instant
coffee
is a similar number with briefly to 50 and 55%.
On the other hand
, the
quantity
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number
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of nationals who love to go to cafes
are
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lower than others,
likewise
, Brisbane and Adelaide had only 34% and Hobart
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circa 40%.
In contrast
, several people in Sydney and Melbourne choose to buy at a cafe
with
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at
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approximately 45%, which is a higher total.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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