The map below shows the plan of a proposed new town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the proposed plan for a new
town
.
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Overall
, Linking Words
this
proposed plan includes different accommodations for the Linking Words
town
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town
dwellers. Including, but not limited to, Remove the redundancy
apply
houses
, Use synonyms
Roads
and recreational areas. There are Use synonyms
also
two industry zones present.
A close at the map reveals that most of the space within the Linking Words
town
is reserved for Use synonyms
houses
which itself is in two parts. The inner circle is filled with Use synonyms
houses
and there are bus stands and parking spaces at the centre of the Use synonyms
town
. Surrounding Use synonyms
this
area, are the ring Linking Words
roads
which are connected to the centre via 4 Use synonyms
roads
. Use synonyms
In addition
to the Linking Words
houses
at the centre, there are Use synonyms
also
Linking Words
houses
to the sides of the Use synonyms
town
.
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Moreover
, there are seven Linking Words
roads
taking the traffic in and out of the Use synonyms
town
.
Recreational areas are Use synonyms
also
in the Linking Words
town
as well. They are situated near the Use synonyms
houses
and by the Use synonyms
roads
. Use synonyms
However
, almost each Linking Words
one
of them is in the inner circle with only Use synonyms
one
of them being located out of it.
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Furthermore
, there are 2 different areas reserved for industry purposes. Linking Words
one
of them is located in the south-east and the other Use synonyms
one
on the opposite side of the Use synonyms
town
.Use synonyms
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