The map below shows the plan of a proposed new town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the plan of a proposed new town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map illustrates the proposed plan for a new
town
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.
Overall
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,
this
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proposed plan includes different accommodations for the
town
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town
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dwellers. Including, but not limited to,
houses
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,
Roads
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and recreational areas. There are
also
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two industry zones present. A close at the map reveals that most of the space within the
town
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is reserved for
houses
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which itself is in two parts. The inner circle is filled with
houses
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and there are bus stands and parking spaces at the centre of the
town
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. Surrounding
this
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area, are the ring
roads
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which are connected to the centre via 4
roads
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.
In addition
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to the
houses
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at the centre, there are
also
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houses
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to the sides of the
town
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.
Moreover
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, there are seven
roads
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taking the traffic in and out of the
town
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. Recreational areas are
also
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in the
town
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as well. They are situated near the
houses
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and by the
roads
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.
However
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, almost each
one
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of them is in the inner circle with only
one
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of them being located out of it.
Furthermore
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, there are 2 different areas reserved for industry purposes.
one
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of them is located in the south-east and the other
one
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on the opposite side of the
town
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the sixth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, houses, roads, one with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.
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