The maps below shoe an industrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned future developement of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparsions where relevant.

The following maps depict the present situation and the future construction ideas proposed for the development of the industrial zone in the town of
Norbition
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Nutrition
.
However
, the factory blocks around the only roundabout of the main road
as well as
on each side of the same alley are being planned to be removed in future
whereas
all of them will be converted into housing facilities. A new road is expected to be added to the circle with a new shop on the southwest corner of it. A new small circle is expected to be added in the boulevard on the south corner of the map where a medical shop will
be appeared
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just near the new roundabout. Meanwhile, a school and a playground will be established on the northern and the eastern sides of the map respectively.
Moreover
, factory buildings are supposed to be fused to make a wider building complex, established just opposite the location of the proposed playground.
Lastly
, a bridge will be constructed on the river to connect the only housing complex which is expected to be built on the farmland with the mainland.
Overall
, the main idea is to replace the factories in Norbition with a modern housing colony where different types of facilities are expected to be present and
also
to connect the farmland with the main town.
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