You are living in an English speaking country and the restaurant near you is making a lot of noise. Write a letter to the restaurant owner. Cover the following: - tell restaurant owner to reduce the noise levels. - suggest a solution to fix the problem. - warn that if this problem remains not solved then further action will be taken.

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Dear Sir, I hope

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letter finds you in good health and high spirits. I am writing to bring your attention to an issue I recently encountered with your restaurant noise. I will bring it to your knowledge that

last

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night there was a party in the restaurant, the sound of

music

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the music

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was too loud which disturbed my sleep. You know that everyone has a sedentary lifestyle in which they have very

less

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little

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time to take rest in their house.

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night I

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was

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unable to complete my sleep because of loud music.

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, today, I

fall

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fell

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sick owing to lack of sleep my body

feel

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feels

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tired . Every lock has a key so I suggested that you

shoul

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should

add acoustic panels on the walls for noise abatement in the restaurant. I hope you understand my concerns and take immediate action regarding

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problem. If you do not take any action as soon as possible

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we will

complaint

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to the police so that we can live in

safe

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a safe

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environment. Looking forward to a positive and prompt

respone

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response

from your side. Yours truly , Jazz

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coherence cohesion

Consider organizing your paragraphs more clearly by separating different ideas into distinct sections. For instance, you might want to discuss the problem, solution, and warning in separate paragraphs.

task achievement

Try to maintain a formal and neutral tone throughout the letter. For example, "You must understand" could be replaced with "I hope you understand" to sound more polite.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriately used and provide a polite tone.

task achievement

The letter clearly outlines the problem, provides a solution, and warns of further action, fulfilling the task response effectively.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

185 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

resident
disruptive
soundproofing
mitigation
quality of life
operating hours
formal avenues
maintaining a good relationship
constructive suggestion
impacting
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