The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The tables show how farmers from five
countries
(
UK
,
Switzerland
,
Denmark
, Belgium,
Sweden
) should pay an
official
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officially
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agreed fair price based on the
sales
of
coffee
and
bananas
in 1999 and 2004. Explained in millions of
euros
.
Overall
, there is a
slightly different
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slight difference
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in the growth rates of
Coffee
and
Bananas
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banana
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sales
.
For the
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The
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sales
of
Coffee
from 1999 to 2004
showing
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showed
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an
increase
in all of the European
countries
. Meanwhile, for
sales
of
Bananas
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Bananas,
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only 3
countries
show
the
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an
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increase
of
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in
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the
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apply
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sales
(
Switzerland
,
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the Uk
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Uk
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UK
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, Belgium) and for
Sweden
and
Denmark
the
sales
are
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apply
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decrease
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decreased
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. The
sales
of
fairtrade-labelled
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fair trade-labelled
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coffee
, from 5
countries
, it can be seen that in 1999
Switzerland
had the highest
sales
, followed by
Denmark
, 3,000
euros
and 1,800
euros
respectively. But in 2004 we can see that the
increase
of
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in
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the
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apply
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coffee
sales
in
UK
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the UK
show examples
was significant,
therefore
UK
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the UK
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become
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became
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the highest
sales
of
Coffee's
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Coffee
show examples
fairtrade
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Fairtrade
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with a number of 20,000
euros
. Both the lowest
sales
of
Coffee
in 1999 and 2004
is
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are
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the country of
Sweden
, only 800
euros
and 1,000
euros
). For the fairtrade of
the
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apply
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Banana's
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Banana
show examples
sales
,
Switzerland
become
Verb problem
had
show examples
the upmost
sales
in 1999 and 2004 with
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
numbers
reach
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reaching
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15,000
euros
and 47,000
euros
, respectively. In 2004
Bananas
still
become
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became
show examples
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a favorite
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favorite
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favourite
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, proven by the significant
increase
in the
sales
of
the
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apply
show examples
Bananas
(up to 4 times higher). In the
mean time
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meantime
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, in
Sweden
and
Denmark
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Denmark,
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the consumer preferences
of
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for
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Bananas
are declining, only 1,000
euros
and 900
euros
, each.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, uk, switzerland, denmark, sweden, sales, coffee, bananas, euros, increase with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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