The first chart below shows the number of airline crew (pilots, stewards etc) needed to fly a passenger plane between Australia and a number of other countries. The second chart shows the number of passenger complaints per plane journey made on these routes, and average kilogram (kg) weight of luggage (or baggage) carried per passenger.

The first chart below shows the number of airline crew (pilots, stewards etc) needed to fly a passenger plane between Australia and a number of other countries. The second chart shows the number of passenger complaints per plane journey made on these routes, and average kilogram (kg) weight of luggage (or baggage) carried per passenger.
The following first
chart
compares the
number
of airline crew who needed to fly between Australia and other nations,
while
the second
chart
illustrates both the
number
of
traveler
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claims per
airplane
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and the
weight
that allowed for passengers to carry on in kg.
Overall
, it is clearly highlighted that the comparison between the four nations Malaysia, New Zealand, Germany, and Indonesia;
however
, there are fluctuations in both charts. Having a closer look at the first
chart
, it is interesting to note that Germany has the largest
number
of airline crew at over 14, followed by Indonesia at over 10 crews.
In contrast
, Malaysia and New Zealand accounted for the lowest
number
of airline crew at 8 and 6 crews, respectively. Turning to the second
chart
, it is remarkable that there is a great difference between the
weight
of luggage and the
number
of complaining passengers per flight;
however
; the carry-on
weight
in Germany occupies the top position at over 35 kg per
traveler
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,
whereas
it is the lowest of complaints which there
is
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nearly no claims.
In contrast
, New Zealand is completely opposite, the average kilogram
weight
of baggage is the smallest,
while
the passenger complaints per plane journey was the highest at nearly 5.
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