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The table below provides information about the

number

of

visitors

to Ashdown Museum before and after its

renovation

during the year.

Additionally

, the chart illustrates survey results indicating

visitors

' satisfaction levels over the same two periods.

To begin

with, the chart shows that the total

number

of

visitors

to the museum before refurbishment was 74,000. After the

renovation

, the

number

of

visitors

significantly increased to a total of 92,000.

Furthermore

, survey results indicate that before the

renovation

, the proportion of satisfied

visitors

was notably low, at approximately 30%. Correspondingly, the

number

of dissatisfied and very dissatisfied people was markedly high. About 40% of

visitors

before restoration were displeased, and 10% of customers were extremely discontented.

On the other hand

, the second chart compares information on visitor satisfaction levels one year after the

renovation

.

For instance

, the

number

of very satisfied and satisfied customers increased modestly, reaching 75% of total

visitors

, with 35% of them being highly pleased.

As a result

, the percentage of dissatisfied guests decreased significantly, dropping from 40% to 15%.

Moreover

, the proportion of very dissatisfied

visitors

was reduced by half, from 10% to 5