The graphs below show the number of marriages and divorces in the USA between 1970 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graphs below show the number of marriages and divorces in the USA between 1970 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar graphs
illustrates
Change the verb form
illustrate

The singular verb illustrates does not appear to agree with the plural subject graphs. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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the number of
the
Correct article usage
apply

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marriages and divorces and the
martial
Correct your spelling
marital

The word martial doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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status of
the
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apply

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adult
Fix the agreement mistake
adults

It seems that adult may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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in the USA from 1970 to 2000.
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Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, it is evident that
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Add more linking words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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