The graphs below show the number of marriages and divorces in the USA between 1970 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graphs below show the number of marriages and divorces in the USA between 1970 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The bar graphs
illustrates
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the number of
the
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apply
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marriages and divorces and the
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marital
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status of
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adult
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adults
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in the USA from 1970 to 2000.
Overall
, it is evident that
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