The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The graph illustrates the figures of markets that are closed
while
others are opend
in one region Correct your spelling
opened
open
since
2011 until 2018. Change preposition
from
To begin
with, it is clear that
the numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
opinings
started at the highest point in 2001 rather than the closures.
Correct your spelling
opinions
Firstly
, the number of shops
had
Unnecessary verb
apply
opene approximatly
Correct your spelling
opened approximately
was
8500 Unnecessary verb
apply
then
dramatically plummeted in 2012 moreover
, had grew significantly in 2014 to reach 6000 shops
after that droped
again to Correct your spelling
dropped
be
4000 Unnecessary verb
apply
shops
but remained stable until 2017 to decreased
again.
Wrong verb form
decrease
On the other hand
, closed shops
had begin
with between 6000 and 6300 since Change the verb form
begun
year
Correct article usage
the year
then
it had increase
Replace the word
increased
regulary
to Correct your spelling
regularly
achive
the highest number in 2013 after that remain Correct your spelling
achieve
droped
until had the lowest point in 2015 which is nearly to be zero. Correct your spelling
dropped
draped
Although
, the Correct word choice
However
numbers
are
rose significantly until Unnecessary verb
apply
reach
Wrong verb form
reached
the
stability point over Correct article usage
a
years
.
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the years
overall
, The lines are
describe upward and downward Unnecessary verb
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
numbers
that explains
there Change the verb form
explain
is
no fixed Change the verb form
are
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
shops
and the country had improve
over Wrong verb form
has improved
years
.Correct article usage
the years
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Vocabulary: Replace the words numbers, shops with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "droped" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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