The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012.
The provided bar chart reveals how much spending
for
health in percentage of the Gross Domestic Product in several Europe countries in three years: 2002, 2007, and 2012.
Change preposition
on
Overall
, some of the nations had a stable expenditures
, Correct the article-noun agreement
stable expenditures
a stable expenditure
while
others varied in each of the mentioned years. Switzerland spend
the most amount Wrong verb form
spent
for
Change preposition
on
health
sector, Add an article
the health
whereas
the lowest was for Estonia.
According to
the graph, Switzerland spend
around 11% of Gross Domestic Product in the three years, followed by Belgium at one-tenth. Wrong verb form
spent
Following
this
pattern, the expenditure of Spain and Estonia was 2% and 5% below Belgium respectively.
On the other hand
, the remaining nations had a changing figure in one of the year
. Change to a plural noun
years
For instance
, Denmark, Lithuania, Slovenia, and Poland spent the most amount in 2012 at 10%, 6%, 9% and 7% each. On the contrary
, Luxembourg, France, and Netherlands
Correct article usage
the Netherlands
which
allocated the smallest percentage that year. France allocated the highest percentage in 2007 (11%), Correct pronoun usage
apply
while
for the Netherlands, it was in 2002 (10%)Submitted by 000silr111 on
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