The maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two rendered maps, which depict in great detail, illustrate the comparison
city
Change preposition
of city
centre
in two time periods.
Fix the agreement mistake
centres
Overall
, it is clearly observable that in the Southern town
centre
in 1990, there were many houses while
,
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apply
today
they become apartment blocks.
To commence with, in 1990, in the northern city
centre
there were many separate shops such
as newsagent's
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newsagents
Grocer's
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Grocer
Baker's
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bakers'
Butcher's
and Cafe Change noun form
Butcher
whereas
, today
all separate shops become a shopping mall. Also
Smith Street in 1990 that
cars could pass through there, now both sides are dead ends and only people can pass. Correct word choice
apply
Furthermore
, between the town
hall and bank
, a pedestrian line is drawn now.
On the flip side, in 1990, in southern Correct article usage
the bank
town
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towns
city
were many houses but today
, they rebuild
Verb problem
have
as well
as
become apartment blocks. Correct word choice
and
In addition
, between Town
tall and Apartment blocks a pedestrian line is drawn now. Apart from, the mentioned changes no other changes have been made in the city
centre
in 1990 and today
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, centre, town, today with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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