The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The pie charts illustrate the share of
water
usage
in different sectors in six regions of the world.
Overall
, out of all the regions, only in North
America
and
Europe
where the agriculture sector does not dominate
water
usage
. Both in North
America
and
Europe
, industrial
use
dominates
water
usage
with 48% and 53%, respectively.
While
North
America
has the higher percentage of 39% in agricultural
use
,
Europe
only has 32%.
Nonetheless
, domestic
use
in
Europe
is slightly higher compared to North
America
. In the other 4 areas, namely South
America
, Africa, Central
Asia
, and Southeast
Asia
, agricultural
use
dominates the
water
usage
percentage.
While
the
usage
in Central
Asia
, Africa, and Southeast
Asia
goes over 80%, South
America
only has 71% .
However
, domestic
use
in South
America
is the highest among 6 other regions with 19%.
Moreover
, South
America
and South East
Asia
have higher industrial
use
with over 10% compared to Africa and Central
Asia
with just under 10%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, usage, america, europe, use, asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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