Friendships that take place online are not as meaningful as those where people meet each other face to face.

It is argued that

relationship

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which can

be build

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via social media networks

is

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not always good and valuable rather

than in

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the

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real life where we can

face

each other in person.

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,

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generating online friendships has several benefits,I am in

favor

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of making

friends

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face

. To start with,it is becoming

casual

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occasion which is finding someone who has common with tastes,beliefs and perceptions.And some call

this

phenomenon online fondness.So,

this

might be meaningful in many circumstances for a certain type of people, especially,for introverted characterised ones.They are more likely to struggle with socialization skills to communicate with other people in

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authenetic

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authentic

world.

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,

this

way,can find out about to be more communicative and how to talk

to

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easily

in

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any topic

in

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virtual

friends

.

Consequently

,

this

might be

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opportunity to overcome shyness and being closed.

In addition

,making close one who dwells overseas can be another great tactic to discover

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other nation's cultures,rituals and

language

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as well.

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,not

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we emerge strong connections,but we can

also

expand our knowledge.The more we socialize and negotiate with our online peers,the more intelligent we might be.

On the other hand

,the lingkings which we set up online may be meaningless rather than

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face

.First and foremost,we can lose our virtual

friends

in a second.As an example,if a boy wants to break up with his friend,he does it by just deleting his account.

This

might be nothing and usual for a boy;

however

,

this

can be

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for his friend.

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,

then

,leads to depression.It,

moreover

,is

also

worth mentioning that we can impress our emotions and feelings by meeting.But,in comparison,it is limited to

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emotions like crying,laughing or yelling.We can simply send our video or voice messages and any sort of emojis.

This

might be complicated to make conversation and become close as expected. In conclusion,

while

having

friends

online by varied networks like

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,telegram,

Whatsapp

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or

snapchat

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might be helpful in many regards,I am totally opposed to it as it can be broken at once or as not be meaningful as

our

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affection which we make in the real world.