You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear..., You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear
Eligabeth
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Elizabeth
Elisabeth
, I am
exteremly
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extremely
happy that you are pondering
of
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learning how to
drive
.
Also
, I will try my best to give you some guidance on
this
.
Firstly
, getting a license is quite pivotal.
As you
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can go wherever you want and can
drive
without any restrictions.
Als
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, you won't need anyone to
drive
for you.
Since getting
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a license can give you more
confidense
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confidence
that you can
drive
safe
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and
good
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enough for yourself if you follow
rules
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the rules
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. Having said that, You must learn driving to get
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a permit
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to operate
car
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or other related vehicle. Despite there
are
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various schools, I recommend
to do enquire
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before getting into any
institue
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institute
.
Also
, I know one school
that is
"
Drive
well". If you want I can refer you there.
Morever
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Moreover
prices are cheap. Moving
further
, there are a lot of things to keep in mind. Like, from being mindful of
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the pedestrian
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pedestrian
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to checking
shoudler
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shoulder
timely and as required is very significant. These are some big things that can greatly impact your driving skills. Even though I
ma
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occupied these days, still you can come to my home, I can let you
drive
my car under my guidance so you can know
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. Regards Soojana
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task achievement
Ensure to address all parts of the task fully and in detail.
coherence and cohesion
Organize paragraphs clearly to present single ideas or related points for better coherence.
language features
Check spelling and grammar to avoid minor errors that may affect understanding.
task achievement
The overall tone of the letter is suitable for a friendly and informative communication.
coherence and cohesion
The letter includes appropriate greetings and closings for a personal letter.
coherence and cohesion
Each paragraph generally serves a distinct purpose or idea.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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