The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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What the line graph reveals is the changes in three types of crime in Newport City Center between 2003 and 2012.
Overall
,
it is clear that
a downward development can be seen in the burglary cases.
However
, the figures
of
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robbery were still at the same level in the range of 500 to 1000 in
this
ten years
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period. The number of robbery incidents fluctuated between 2000 and 3000. Looking at the chart more closely, one can see that in the beginning, the number of burglary reports was increasing, and it peaked at about 3750 in 2004.
Subsequently
, it went down continuously until reached the bottom at around 1200 in 2008.
However
, after 2009 the number almost remained stable at approximately 1400. Originally, the figure of car theft was nearly 3800.
Then
, it dropped at first and ascended after. In the end, it went back to the original spot.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • instances of crime
  • significant decline
  • noticeable change
  • fluctuating trend
  • relatively stable
  • minor fluctuations
  • dramatic reduction
  • converged towards
  • crime rate
  • time frame
  • notable trajectory
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