3. The availability of entertainment such as video games on handheld devices are harmful to individual and to the socity they live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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can entertain themselves conveniently,

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, they can play video

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on their phones or laptops.

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, some

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think that it will be harmful to

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and to the

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they live in, and some think it would not. Below will explore both sides of the debate about whether the

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is harmful. Proponents of increasing

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of

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emphasizes

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that it would

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people

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's mental health. Especially to those who are living in fast-paced cities, they have

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work to do

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. Going to work,

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care of family, these things already "grab" more than half of the day

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them

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. If they just keep

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, it is believed that their mental health will definitely be destroyed.

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, they need

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to entertain themselves to ensure that they can get enough rest to relieve. Considering that, the rising

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availability

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absoulutely

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will be a big help to these kinds of

people

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. After working a day, they can just pick up their phone, and download some

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to play.

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, they can

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some videos on

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social platforms,

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,

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, Instagram reels or Youtube. The

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availabiliy

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availability

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is making

people

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to

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relax themselves

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in a short

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. Opponents of

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people

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on handheld

devices

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critizes

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criticise

that it will

decrease

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people

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time

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to communicate with

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others

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in real life

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and

decrease

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their

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to go outside. As

people

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can entertain themselves everywhere by using handheld

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, most of them will choose to stay at home and play

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alone. It will lead to a lack of face-to-face interactions, and

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it is not good

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society

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.

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will become not used to

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to others in real life and even hate to see others.

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, it increases

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risk that

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will addicted to

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games

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on those gadgets. As it is convenient,

people

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can play

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no matter what

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or what place it is. Even though they are working, they still can entertain secretly. Addiction

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handheld

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not only

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decrease

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their communication skills

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but

also

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leading their working effort

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.

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mean

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it will harm themselves,

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and

also

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to

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the

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society

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. All in all, the debate over whether the

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availability

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is good or bad will probably continue.

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it can help

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to relax conveniently in a short

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, keeping them

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a good mental health, there are

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thoughts that it will

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their interaction abilities, leading

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to

individual

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individuals

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and

society

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. On balance, the arguments for the

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availabiliy

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availability

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entertainment

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carry more weight. It is essential to establish a balance between entertaining on handheld

devices

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and going outside.