Is the radio the best way to get news, or is TV better for this purpose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some
people
think for
getting news Change preposition
apply
radio
would be good
choice, but others think Add an article
a good
TV
would be better. Although
, news which is from radio
is more comfortable to Add an article
the radio
a radio
getting
new information. Change the form of the verb
get
However
, on television people
can see with pectures
and they can understand fully.
On the one Correct your spelling
pictures
hand
Add a comma
hand,
radio
is the most
convenient than other items which Rephrase
more
is
for getting Change the verb form
are
informations
. Change the wording
information
pieces of information
For example
: people
can get informations
on Change the wording
information
pieces of information
road
in their car or on Add an article
the road
bus
and they do not most to Add an article
the bus
a bus
send
Correct your spelling
spend
many
Correct word choice
apply
time
to get news. Fix the agreement mistake
times
As a result
, they can easily find reference
which Add an article
a reference
is need
for them. If they do not have Change the verb form
is needed
radio
they have to spend Add an article
a radio
their
most time Correct pronoun usage
apply
to watch
Wrong verb form
watching
TV
or other videos.
On the other side on television
Add a comma
television,
people
have opportunity
to get Correct article usage
the opportunity
report
fully and clearly with colourful videos and Fix the agreement mistake
reports
also
there are visual impact which is more fascinating to watch. For instance
: in their home when they wont
convene their time meaningful and they Add an apostrophe
won't
able
to see it. Add a missing verb
are able
As a
consequence
they get Add a comma
consequence,
reference
fully than Fix the agreement mistake
more references
radio
. However
, when we do not get information from TV
and
we can not get it entirely. Correct word choice
apply
Thus
, TV
is most
suitable technological equipment than Rephrase
more
radio
.
To conclude
, both these media are not equalent
and interchangeable with each other, as they Correct your spelling
equivalent
uneque
characteristics. The television, Correct your spelling
unique
however
, has a slight edge over the radio
becouse
of its visual impact.Correct your spelling
because
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task achievement
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Your opinion
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