The diagram shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The process of producing instant noodles is described in the following image.
Overall
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, the process involves stages like manufacturing dough sheets and noodle strips, the addition of vegetables and spices, labelling and others.
Firstly
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, the flour
that is
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transported by trucks is stored in special barns. Afterwards, a mixture of flour, water and oil is converted into dough sheets by a special machine with a roller. In order to produce noodle discs, these sheets are cut into strips. In the next stage, noodle discs are cooked and left for drying which is followed by a stage when discs, some vegetables and different spices are added into a box. Once all ingredients are added to the boxes, now it is time to switch to the
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phase which involves labelling filled cups with factory seals
then
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noodles are ready to be transported to different shops, and supermarkets and consumed by potential customers.
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